tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384478732502572867.post2746586632649716289..comments2017-02-20T10:09:35.934-08:00Comments on विचारों की सांझ : वासंती हवा Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12649497446573698575noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384478732502572867.post-67314703430984120352016-09-29T22:27:47.376-07:002016-09-29T22:27:47.376-07:00Thanks for such a positive review.The constructive...Thanks for such a positive review.The constructive criticisms are always a part of betterment and reforms and we need it. Yeah it is written in monsoon but describes spring.It gives message of optimism in last stanza that everything will be better after a dark night. Thanks again.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12649497446573698575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384478732502572867.post-35446913747357472432016-09-29T13:33:18.769-07:002016-09-29T13:33:18.769-07:00The starting is great! The way it started and proc...The starting is great! The way it started and proceeded to 2nd and 3rd stanza, capturing the nature and how it will be changing, it's just the best part. How it was written in the monsoon! It aptly describes spring, the lazy Sunday mornings of spring. The alliterations and the rhyming gives a great poetic edge. 4th stanza has a great lyrical feel, specially. कोयलों की कूक को क्यों beautiful alliteration. Fantastic creation overall! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03057711871001956382noreply@blogger.com